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Brings us the imagined memoirs of the first black explorer of America--a Moroccan slave whose testimony was left out of the official record. In 1527, the conquistador Pánfilo de Narváez sailed from the port of Sanlúcar de Barrameda with a crew of six hundred men and nearly a hundred horses. His goal was to claim what is now the Gulf Coast of the United States for the Spanish crown and, in the process, become as wealthy and famous as Hernán Cortés. But from the moment the Narváez expedition landed in Florida, it faced peril--navigational errors, disease, starvation, as well as resistance from indigenous tribes. Within a year there were only four survivors: the expedition's treasurer, Álvar Núñez Cabeza de Vaca; a Spanish nobleman named Alonso del Castillo Maldonado; a young explorer named Andrés Dorantes de Carranza; and Dorantes's Moroccan slave, Mustafa al-Zamori, whom the three Spaniards called Estebanico. These four survivors would go on to make a journey across America that would transform them from proud conquis-tadores to humble servants, from fearful outcasts to faith healers.… (more)
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The back and forth narrative, told in the form of stories about different locations such as “The Story of the Island of Misfortune,” helps maintain suspense and interest. It also gives the novel the structure of an older mode of story-telling that is credible for the 16th century. Through Estebanico’s eyes, Lalami captures the sights, sounds, and smells of the exotic landscape in prose that is measured and evocative. Her narrator also takes note of the character and personality of the expedition leaders, including his owner Dorantes and the expedition treasurer Cabeza de Vaca, who in 1542 wrote a narrative of the expedition. In the course of this grueling ordeal, social differences and rank begin to dissolve, and hidalgo and slave become equal. But the question remains: once the survivors return to Spanish territory will these distinctions re-emerge? Will Estebanico win his freedom? And will treatment of the indigenous population of the Americas change? This novel offers the reader a new perspective on the Spanish exploration of North America, as well as a moving portrait of what it means to be a slave.
This book is a fictionalized story based on a real expedition that took place in 1527 - 1536. Lalami creates a story around Mustafa, “The Moor,” a survivor of the Narváez expedition. His goal is to write what truly happened to the explorers sent to claim La Florida for the King of Spain. He intends to refute the “official” account, provided by Cabeza de Vaca, which leaves out anything that makes the explorers seem less than heroic.
As the story opens, protagonist Mustafa is living in Morocco with his mother, father, and brothers. He is an educated man who becomes a merchant, but when circumstances change, he feels he must sell himself into slavery to feed his family. He is renamed Estebanico by Spanish priests. He is purchased by a Spaniard who then offers him to Dorantes to pay a gambling debt. Dorantes takes him to the New World as part of the Narváez expedition.
This is the type of historical fiction I really enjoy. It is an adventure, filled with travels among the native peoples. We get a sense of what life was like in the 1500s in North America. It is believable that the official account would leave out anything that reflected poorly on those telling the story. It is based on the author’s extensive research, with sources provided in the appendix.
Toward the end, there are groups of Indians following the explorers, when they reconnect with the Spanish in Mexico. I felt like I wanted to warn them not to follow! Readers will know this part of history does not turn out well for them. The author made me care deeply about the protagonist and the native people of this historic period. I loved it!
Estebanico, the North African slave who narrates "The Moor's Account"
In its most apparent aspect, Laila Lalami's "The Moor's Account" tells the story of the four survivors of Panfilo
The novel is actually about much more than the somewhat fantastical trials and tribulations of three spanish conquistadors and one lone slave. Lalami is clearly a fan of the art of storytelling. Her passion seeps through the pages of her novel, and through the well-written voice of Mustafa ibn Muhammad who's given the name Esteban when he sells himself into slavery.
"When I fell into slavery, I was forced to give up not just my freedom, but also the name that my mother and father had chosen for me. A name is precious; it carries inside it a language, a history, a set of traditions, a particular way of looking at the world."
- Mustafa
Lalami writes a strong voice in her character of Estebanico. She sets the right tone with his frank narration, brief dialogue, and insights from his internal monologue and simple plot elements. As the story progresses, the parallel plot threads of Mustafa's backstory and the expedition itself, take on more meaning and imbue the reader with the feeling that they will ultimately flow together and create something of significance.
Pafilo Narvaez, who made a rather notorious name for himself (and lost an eye) during Cortez' brutally successful campaign against Moctezuma, continued to seek his fame and fortune by pulling together an expedition to the new world of La Florida. A disaster almost from the outset, only four of the adventurers survived (and only barely at that), and in the process transformed themselves into traveling medicine men who came face-to-face with the horrors their own people had unleashed upon the New World natives.
"Telling a story is like sowing a seed--you always hope to see it become a beautiful tree…"
- Mustafa
The narrative itself is made up of stories; some longer, none particularly long. Within the narrative itself, the act of storytelling -- the listening and telling -- are recognized and accepted with high value. Mustafa says, "Reader, the joy of a story is in its telling. My feet were throbbing with pain and my stomach was growling with hunger, so I could not resist the pleasure that a tale would bring me."
As the four travelers wind their way across the coast of the Gulf of Mexico, they find that their collective modicum of medical knowledge is leaps beyond the natives' capabilities. The legend of their healing abilities precede them, but Mustafa confides that they actually knew very little and that "A good story can heal" as well as, or perhaps better, than the treatment itself.
Lalami's writing is trim and stark, though very literate. Interestingly, Lalami doesn't use quotation marks, which adds to the flow and almost dreamlike quality of the storytelling.
There were two drawbacks to the story. First, there was only a weak sense of location; since the story is based in fact, a map would've helped, there wasn't one with my advanced reader's copy - maybe there will be with the final published product. If not, readers should search the internet for maps of the journey told in this story. Second, aside from Mustafa, none of the other characters were particularly well drawn. The story itself, and the strength of Mustafa's character, successfully drive the narrative, but building out the complementary characters would also have added significantly to the tale.
I received this book through the Amazon Vine Program.
My favorite quote: Telling a story is like sowing a seed - you always hope to see it become a beautiful tree, with firm roots and branches that soar up in the sky. But it is a peculiar sowing, for you will never know whether your seed sprouts or dies.
The book is about the moor, Estibanico, and he is an interesting and good man and you get caught up in his adventures. A few of his fellow adventurers are adequately
The novel was interesting as showing the relations between the survivors and the customs of the different Indian tribes with whom the men lived. I kept reading to see how the men survived the different hardships which they endured. I wish there had been a glossary of unfamiliar terms, among them the Muslim terms.
The expedition splits up and Mustafa and his master travel with one group over the land and discovers the city of Apalache, but there is no gold. To make matters worse, they are running low on supplies and have become lost in the unknown land. They try to find a Spanish port where they can get help, but there’s nothing to be find. Narváez refuses to give up the idea that there might be gold nearby. He keeps interrogating the Indians for information. He pushes onward, but the expedition is plagued with sickness, a lack of supplies, and constant attack from the natives.
Throughout the journey, Mustafa reminisces on his past. His family wanted him to become a notary when he was younger, but he defied their wishes and became a merchant. He was fascinated with being a merchant because of how much money they made. His desire for money continued to grow and he soon found himself trading slaves. When the town came under siege, he lost his job and struggled to make any money. With no other way to take care of his family, he sold himself into slavery.
The expedition soon falls apart and the survivors are scattered throughout the region. Mustafa and his master along with some of his other companions manage to find a friendly Indian tribe. Mustafa learns their language and customs and gets help for the expedition. Disease forces them to move once again, their numbers much smaller. Madness begins to set in for some of the survivors, who desert the group and end up resorting to cannibalism. A few members give up on returning home and try to find home among the Indians.
Through all of this Mustafa feels terrified, but also free on his journey. The survivors continue to dwindle in number until there are only four left. Together, they become legends among the different tribes thanks to their medical knowledge. Soon, they are all wed by the tribe. They spend years traveling together, treating different tribes and gathering a large group of followers. Eventually, they run into fellow Castilians, who bring them to New Spain. While welcomed by there own Mustafa finds he is a slave once again. To make matters worse, his wife is enslaved alongside him. The final sections of the story are suspenseful as the reader wonders if Mustafa will ever gain his freedom and with it a return home or some other outcome that will allow his wife to live with him on their own.
Lalami creates a believable account of the expedition from the Moor's viewpoint. This is provides a much different perspective than that of the Conquistadors. Thus the reader has a different view of the Native Americans and their surroundings that they met along the way. This is historical fiction at its best that I would recommend to all who have an interest in the history of the exploration of the Americas.
There are so many things that I loved in this book that I
So much of this story is horrifying to the modern reader -- and I don't mean the mysterious diseases, the starvation, or even the occasional cannibalism. I mean the utter hubris of a group of explorers reading a proclamation to an empty beach about how this land now belongs to God, therefore the crown, therefore us, and therefore you (reminder, the absent you, who never heard the proclamation because you weren't there) will comply with everything we say or we will make war with you. A thing that was real and apparently happened all the time. And that proclamation gave them authority to torture, steal, rape, desecrate, and destroy their way across the continent. But then when the expedition floundered, and handfuls of survivors found themselves dependent on various tribes of natives, oh the bitching and whining at how they were treated!
Maybe this is the era Trump is nostalgic for when he wants to make America great again. He and his fondness for Andrew Jackson. Back when rich white representatives of power could do anything they liked with anyone who was not. "Oh, don't worry!" says the smiling man in charge! "They're not slaves, we're much more civilized than that now!" as he steadfastly refuses to release a group of natives, and nimbly deflects all questions as to why they're being held in the first place.
It's not survival porn, though. Mustafa as a narrator keeps us grounded in humanity, with his longing for home, with his empathy, with his desire to be free.
Such a wonderful book. And important for these times.
The drawback for me was that I listened to an audio version of the book as narrated by Neil Shah which presented a number of problems for me. First I found it very difficult to keep the many characters straight as to my uneducated ear, the Spanish names often sounded the same. While the narrator had the Castilian accent down pat, I found his voice quite irritating and his performance at times rather over wrought. Woman’s voices were particularly irritating, they all sounded like simpering fools. I think if I had read this book rather than listened, I would have loved it, instead I found my constant irritation pulled me away from the story.
It’s hard to give this book a rating as I believe it would have been four plus stars if I had read the book whereas as an audio that rating comes down to a 2. So I have decided not to give this book a numbered rating as I don’t want my feelings about the narrator’s interpretation to take away from the excellent writing and research that produced such an interesting story based on actual history.
The Moor's Account is based on one line in a report of a Spanish expedition to the New World in the 16th century. Nothing is known about the black slave
Mustafa is the hard-working and greedy son of a trader who takes his life and freedom for granted. When his Moroccan city is captured by the Portuguese, times get hard and his family struggles for the basics. He decides the way to save the others is to sell himself into slavery. His years working for a Spanish merchant offer few moments of happiness, and his loyalty and ability to help his master make a fortune are not appreciated. He ends up the slave of a soldier traveling to the New World to seek gold and lands for the king of Spain in New Florida.
Just as hubris helped lead to his downfall in his native city, ignorant pride leads to disaster for the Spaniards. Their journey through the wilderness does not lead to the gold they thought would be found easily. As their number dwindle and they are reduced to the most base forms of trying to survive, Mustafa, who was renamed Esteban, then Estebanico, finds ways to survive and thrive.
Mustafa's inherent dignity and willingness to meet the circumstances of each day as they find him, or his resilience, are shown more than told about in the novel. Indeed, every aspect of the novel is subtle, whether it's how Mustafa and the Indians are regarded by the Spaniards, or the small differences in how individuals view the world and their changing circumstances.
Written in a highly formalized fashion, The Moor's Account is more like a series of fables than a fast-paced novel. There are adventures aplenty, but the action is not the point It is the appreciation for the sun, the rain, food and good company you can count on that matters. It is the opportunity to tell one's story so that one is not forgotten.
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I actually think I would potentially read this book again.
Highly recommended.
There are many accounts of
The beginning alternates with chapters of all the pomp and arrogance of the Spaniards decisions and Mustafa telling his life before he was a slave allowing us to see the complex layered reality of his situation. Wonderful storytelling and a fresh robust take of an arduous adventure makes this a book to be read by all interested in early American history and conquest.
As the saying goes – the only new history is history yet to be discovered and I graciously thank the author for her time and research for a thoughtful informative book.