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Fiction. Literature. Historical Fiction. HTML:A haunting literary debut set in the forbidding remote tribal areas of Pakistan and Afghanistan. Traditions that have lasted for centuries, both brutal and beautiful, create a rigid structure for life in the wild, astonishing place where Iran, Pakistan, and Afghanistan meet-the Federally Administered Tribal Areas (FATA). It is a formidable world, and the people who live there are constantly subjected to extremes-of place and of culture. The Wandering Falcon begins with a young couple, refugees from their tribe, who have traveled to the middle of nowhere to escape the cruel punishments meted out upon those who transgress the boundaries of marriage and family. Their son, Tor Baz, descended from both chiefs and outlaws, becomes "The Wandering Falcon," a character who travels among the tribes, over the mountains and the plains, into the towns and the tents that constitute the homes of the tribal people. The media today speak about this unimaginably remote region, a geopolitical hotbed of conspiracies, drone attacks, and conflict, but in the rich, dramatic tones of a master storyteller, this stunning, honor-bound culture is revealed from the inside. Jamil Ahmad has written an unforgettable portrait of a world of custom and compassion, of love and cruelty, of hardship and survival, a place fragile, unknown, and unforgiving..… (more)
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Despite these hardships and restrictions, the people portrayed in this book are full of life and pride in themselves and their tribes, and their stories are both unique and universal.
Jamil Ahmad began his career as a Pakistani civil servant in Balochistan, compiled notes about the people he met there, and originally wrote these stories in the mid-1970s. He retired, moved to Islamabad, and was inspired to rewrite them in 2008 at the age of 75, when the book was initially published. These regions, known as the Federally Administered Tribal Areas, have gained more importance in recent years, as they are home to the Taliban and other insurgent groups that have waged war against the Pakistani and Afghan governments and their Western allies. Although these stories were written well before the onset of the wars in Afghanistan and the strife in Pakistan, Ahmad provides valuable insights into the people who live there, in an engaging manner that made for a quick and enticing read.
Ahmad knows this region well, having worked and lived in the area for decades. He attempts to distill his impressions in a series of vignettes, each depicting a particular tribe and/or social issue. Connecting the stories is a character known as Tor Baz, who is orphaned in the first chapter and moves amongst the tribes throughout the book. He is not, as I first thought, the protagonist of the novel. Rather he, as the perpetual outsider, is the means through which we are allowed access to the tribes.
The role of the chief, or Sardar, is explored in several stories: how they are chosen, the relationship they have with their tribesmen, and the various ways in which the Pakistani government has tried, over the years, to work with or abolish them. At times there is a disconnect between the government and the tribes, at other times there is an almost ritualized arrangement of actions and counteractions that are expected and performed as a means of maintaining the status quo. For some tribes, simply the existence of a nation state is enough to end their nomadic way of life forever. But most heart-wrenching of all is the treatment of women. From the first story to the last, the majority of women suffer. Simple survival is hard, requiring enormous effort in order to sustain a family, often while their husbands are away for years at a time. And harder still is the subjugation of women to the word of their fathers and husbands. Daughters can be sold for a pound of opium, unattached women are prey for slavers, and adultery, under any circumstances, is unforgivable. Yet there is also love and sacrifice, making even the treatment of women in the tribes a contradictory story.
A first-time novelist at the age of eighty, Jamil Ahmad has been trying to get this book published for years. Finally, its time has come, and how fortunate for us. His writing is clean and direct, and his characters seem to me to be the archetypes of people he may have actually known. He has the experience to write authentic fiction, and the distance needed to avoid prejudice. Without preaching or falling back on tired Western assumptions, Ahmad lets us see the complexity of the geopolitical area and its tribal relationships. I sincerely hope that Mr. Ahmad continues to write and be published, and that his present book achieves the readership it deserves.
A boy is orphaned when his parents are murdered in front of him by the
The stories are as fascinating as they are harshly beautiful.
We first meet Tor Baz, the black falcon, when as a young child his parents are killed by his mother’s relatives. She had run away from an impotent husband with one of her father’s servants. They had avoided being caught for many years, but were eventually discovered. From there the child is shuffled around, always wandering and never the main character of the story but instead appearing on the fringes. He is a guide, an informer, a smuggler and a slave trader. This is an unforgiving corner of the world and conditions are harsh. Through these stories the traditions and culture of these tribal people are revealed.
The author writes with great respect and empathy toward these people. Their lives are filled with harshness and cruelty as they wander with their herds. Eventually the political borders are called into play and their wandering lifestyle is curtailed. In one story, “The Death of Camels|”, the refusal of Pakistan to allow them to take their herds to fresh pasture across the border, means not only the death of their herds but brings their own lives into jeopardy as well.
Jamil Ahmad is a gifted storyteller and The Wandering Falcon is a moving account of a disappearing lifestyle.
Each story explores some aspect of the tribal culture in the Afghan/Pakistani region in the period shortly after World War II, of which I had little knowledge before reading this book. I really appreciated learning more about the culture even if I could not always fully understand it. Ahmad writes without judgment which made the stories even more fascinating to me. Ahmad’s prose is stark but even so I found his characters, especially the women, haunting. The ending gave me chills (in a good way).
The story behind how this book came to be published is just as interesting as the book itself. Ahmad worked for many decades as a civil servant in Pakistan. He wrote the first draft of The Wandering Falcon in the 1970s and put it away. In 2008, his brother convinced him to enter it in a writing competition. Eventually it made its way into the hands of an editor at Penguin and the rest is history. Now The Wandering Falcon is long-listed for the 2011 Man Asian Literary Prize. I hope that Jamil Ahmad keeps writing – I would love to read more from him.
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The book starts out with two people wandering in the desert searching for refuge. Although the people do not last through out the
I hope to read additional work by this author in the future.
This book was received from a contest on Goodreads.com from Riverhead Books. This was a first read book. The actualy book is suppose to be on-sale in October.
The Wandering Falcon is a collection of interconnected stories with Tor Baz as the titular character linking them all together. The stories are set in the remote tribal areas where the international borders of Afghanistan,
Overall a great debut effort. The stories meander a bit at times but this book is a very quick read.
I could have used some clarification on the language at times but besides that [The Wandering Falcon] is a well written novel that delves with candid detail into the lives of the nomadic tribes of Pakistan and Afghanistan painting a familiar face of humanity upon each life encountered. The best aspect of the novel is it's illustration of how history and the enacting of borders between nations impacted the very existence of many of these tribes.
An important work based on it's subject matter but a bit hard to get into.
I was very happy to receive the ARC of the “The Wandering Falcon” written by Jamil Ahmad, someone who was very “inside” the tribal culture. Ahmad is a Pakistani civil servant who worked for decades in the Northwest Tribal region. His first posting was in Baluchistan. In 1970, at the urging of his wife, he began to write stories based on his experiences. The result is the fictional account of “The Wandering Falcon,” which is a collection of stories that take place in the mountainous region along the border between Afghanistan and Pakistan. The stories’ characters are members of the nomadic tribes that are in constant flow between the high mountainous areas and the plains, as they take their sheep and goats to grazing areas. They are loosely tied together by the character of Tor Baz, a young boy who was orphaned when his parents, an adulterous couple, were killed according to tribal law when he was 5 years old. He was adopted by Baluch rebels who were fighting the Pakistani government and over time becomes the wandering falcon.
The book is small and is an easy read…and I could not put it down. It is stark and it is brutal as it describes the struggles and life of the people, the interactions between characters and the resolving of life’s issues and conflicts according to tribal law. And yet, embedded in the brutality is a beauty and an empathy for the people that creates a sense of humanity in the telling. Tribal law is something that I cannot understand. I was struck with how black and white it is. There are no gray areas. There is a clear dividing line between right and wrong and there is no hesitation in acting according to the dictates of it.
Ahmed completed the book in 1973 but no one was willing to publish it until 2008 when two young Pakistani women, a Lahore-based bookseller, Aysha Raja, and a Karachi-based columnist and editor, Faiza Sultan Khan, called on Pakistani authors to submit stories for a competition. Ahmad's younger brother insisted that he must show them his work. After reworking the 35-year-old manuscript, Ahmad sent it to Khan, who championed it, and showed it to an editor at Penguin. (source: Basharat Peer, The Guardian).
I am glad that I read the book and while I will never understand how the characters can live as they do and choose as they do, I have a greater appreciation for their life and their struggle. It has also clarified my thoughts and opinions about the Western involvement in this area. I highly recommend the book to anyone who appreciates the beautiful use of words to describe an unknown entity, which Jamil Ahmad did…beautifully!
Not only do the stories convey some of the details vividly convey what it may be like to live this sort of lifestyle, but the people themselves are caught in shifting geopolitics - new rules around borders that mean nothing to them, but mean quite a bit to the countries that are defining them. The stories are poignant and yet contain joy and goodness in the difficulty, too - an urban reader may find both compelling similarities and differences in the hearts of the people in the book.
I would recommend this book to anyone who likes stories that are compelling in detail and yet feel lightly and cleanly written, to anyone who is compelled by the idea of different lives and an unusual perspective on boundary drawing.
Inspired by his time as a civil service worker in the tribal areas of Pakistan, Ahmad writes of a world governed by clan and custom. During his time as a powerful emissary of the Pakistani government under the tribal region's frontier governing system, Jamil Ahmad simultaneously served as politician, police chief, judge, jury and executioner. Bits of this personal history are woven within the stories, including hints of Jamil's wife's German heritage. Environmentalist and activist Helga Ahmad was instrumental in encouraging her husband Jamil to move from halting first attempts at poetry to richly crafted stories of people, place and borders.
The bleak landscapes in the book evoke a world of nomadic treks where human contact is brief and often violent, and where far western desert winds blow clouds of sand so thick that breath is priceless. The environment is unforgiving as is the justice doled out by tribe and government.
Jamil Ahmad finished "The Wandering Falcon" in 1973-74, but the stories did not find a publisher until this year. Penguin Books' decision to at last publish Jamil's stories is timely. Ahmad believes that his stories evoke a vanishing world of tribes that the modern world must resonate and harmonize with: "Because frankly speaking, I still think that each one of us has a tribal gene inside, embedded inside. I really think that way."
Jamil Ahmad hopes that deeper understanding of the tribes that once roamed freely between the far borders of Pakistan, Afghanistan and Iran could help end the wars that stain their mountains and valleys with blood. Reading "The Wandering Falcon" can help begin a process of understanding between the timeless nomadic life and the fragmenting borders of our post-modern society.
Our contemporary world has much to learn from the rhythms of the nomadic trail. I highly recommend Jamil Ahmad's magnificent book "The Wandering Falcon".
Seemingly unconnected stories loosely follow the life of a boy born to a young couple, who has offended against tribal law and is mercilessly hunted down and destroyed. The five-year old Tor Baz, the falcon of the title, is left to his fate by his grandfather and his tribe, next to his shot dead camel at a desert water hole, where his dead mother and his stoned-to-death father had been buried under rocks piled up into two towers. The child is picked up by some members of another tribe, rebels, fugitives, who are tricked into coming to a parley, where they are summarily sentenced and executed. Again the boy survives and again someone takes him along as a matter of fact. There is no pity in this land. Things that need to be done are taken care of and further energy cannot be wasted on them. The tribes live an extremely harsh way of life. They endure on arid soil, beset by dangers all around. Their few pieces of land take back-breaking work by man and woman alike. The nomadic tribes drive their goats and camels from their mountain strongholds to the plains, their few goods, their children, their chickens on their backs, precariously from water hole to water hole. When in the course of history the once porous borders solidify and the lack of papers prevent migration, the animals die and the people starve.
Women, of course, are chattel, work horses who have no voice. They are sold in times of need by their fathers for maybe a pound of opium. They are beaten and discarded and even the lucky few, who find a husband, who is caring, may end up being kidnapped in a raid and sold into prostitution and virtual slavery.
Tribal elders guide their people through precarious times, political trap falls and perennial feuding amongst the tribes, and even within the tribes by the various clans, by following age old laws and wily maneuvering.
In often poetical language, but an emotionally detached voice, the author spreads out the many different regions from Baluchistan to the Swat Valley, before the reader, all the landscapes the wandering falcon passes through in his effort to survive.
This is a book well worth reading, a small book, yet very rich in what it conveys. The author loses not one word about recent history, present day politics or terror, yet anybody reading this book cannot but realize that our very efforts to bring about peace in this world, which seems so very removed from ours, must be doomed.
He gives some idea of the harsh landscape and living conditions, but for the most part his stories are about the people he has worked among and understands. Tribal leaders who make their point in meetings through parables, men who treat their animals better than their women, women who nevertheless manage to exert influence on decisions for the tribe, children who know instinctively who to trust.
In short, this isn't a novel as you normally think of it. A child, the Falcon, who is 5 years old in the first story is the thread upon which Ahmad weaves his fictional tales. In another story he is 7, then 13, then a young man. He appears in each tale but sometimes only in a cameo appearance. The stories tell about the customs and unwritten laws by which the tribal people of this wild country govern their entire lives.
I've read a little about the city people of these countries but wanted to know more about the mysterious tribal people. This is Ahmad's first book, but I hope that even at his advanced age he will continue to tell these stories. I highly recommend this book.
A fascinating peek into the mysterious wanderings of various tribesmen eking out an existence across the borders of Afghanistan and Pakistan. Each character is vividly depicted and the harsh living conditions described with neither pity nor superiority. I found
There is a hard-edged beauty in the desolation of the landscapes described and the lives we see, but nothing is exoticized. Our Western sensibilities are also never spared. While there is violence, the carnage isn't depicted voyeuristically. When we see a daughter get sold for a pound of opium, or when a man kills his lover to protect her from her vengeful family who chases them across the high desert, or when a woman chooses to be sold to a brothel rather than face humiliation at home—it's never depicted in a sensational way. Ahmad avoids romanticizing tribal life or condemning it. This lack of judgment mirrors the tribes themselves, in the unblinking way they face life and reality—and it's a harsh reality, one of migrations, raids, encroaching modernity.
The quality of the writing alone in The Wandering Falcon is worth the read, a throwback to classic storytelling done right. There is a rhythm to the writing that mimics the way the caravans in the stories meander across the hills and mountain passes.
Some people might be frustrated by the fact that there isn't a distinct central character to root for in the book. We first see the protagonist as a child born in the first story, but in succeeding ones we see him move from one group to another without him being the focus. He eventually gets a name, Tor Baz or Black Falcon. Tor drifts in and out of other people's stories obliquely, which is a remarkably postmodern move in an otherwise straightforward, classic story. Ahmad doesn't spend any time developing Tor's character. As Tor drifts around, the role he plays changes—from orphan to informer to trader. He's a protagonist who doesn't want us to follow him. Nor does Ahmad want to reveal anything about him as an individual really. Probably because in the withholding, Ahmad reveals so much more.
The young man's story is as much landscape for the natural world as the natural world is the
Mr. Ahmad has written an incredibly moving book in a style that is evocative and unafraid, even when it moves into something resembling the didactic.
It floored me.
Highly recommended.