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Odd-mannered, obsessive, withdrawn, Aster has little to offer folks in the way of rebuttal when they call her ogre and freak. She's used to the names; she only wishes there was more truth to them. If she were truly a monster, as they accuse, she'd be powerful enough to tear down the walls around her until nothing remained of her world, save for stories told around the cook fire. Aster lives in the low-deck slums of the HSS Matilda, a space vessel organized much like the antebellum South. For generations, the Matilda has ferried the last of humanity to a mythical Promised Land. On its way, the ship's leaders have imposed harsh moral restrictions and deep indignities on dark-skinned sharecroppers like Aster, who they consider to be less than human. Embroiled in a grudge with a brutal overseer and sewing the seeds of civil war, Aster learns there may be a way off the ship if she's willing to fight for it.… (more)
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The ways in which cultures evolve, and their language evolves with them, get acknowledged early on in the novel; the decks of the great ship are culturally divided, divisions which have advanced over hundreds of years as linguistic differences have grown within the insular spaces of individual decks and wings, just as they have done in regions and countries. Solomon asks us to pay attention to those cultural markers, especially the significance of language, as we follow our protagonist through the mystery of her mother's earlier death and her own navigation through the rigid social boundaries on the ship itself. Aster, the focal character of the book, has her own way of speaking but also code-switches as she moves from deck to deck and culture to culture, out of necessity as well as identity. She is a fascinating character; in today's world, she might have been classified as somewhere on some spectrum, but in her world she is simply unique, for better or for worse.
Aster is a doctor and a scientist, but officially she is merely a field hand, because of her skin tone. The ways in which she chafes against the roles that others force on her resonates, as does her eventual rejection of those imposed limits, though that rebellion has unexpected consequences. Those who are looking for a straightforward space story, with clean lines and a victorious ending, may not enjoy this book. It isn't an easy read -- parts of it are frank and brutal, within a narrative that slides from one idea to another with little warning -- but it is a rewarding one, granting the determined reader much food for thought, much recognition, and its own sometimes ambiguous beauty. For those who like their science fiction fresh, thoughtful, and self-aware, this is an excellent book.
The storyline finds, like in Galactica, a colony ship traveling from Earth to some distant unknown destination. But in Solomon’s version, the class system is systematized by decks. Each deck carries some several thousand individuals. The “lower” decks are people of color, and they are essentially prisoners working the crops that feed the upper decks, which are primarily Caucasian. Gender is more fluid and ambiguous in this world, but primarily women are at least represented in the story in these lower decks. We don’t meet any lower-class male characters. Like Handmaid’s Tale, the ruling class enforces religious doctrine that must be followed, curfews and other checks. Guards have free reign to abuse any lower class residents and rape women. The ship has regressed to a system of slavery to benefit the upper class. Most of the history of Earth has been forgotten and the ship has developed its own cultural systems.
The storyline follows one female character, from the lower deck, who is apparently a medical genius of sorts and a few of her “friends:” another lowerdeck female who is a bit insane and an upper-class surgeon who recognizes her brilliance.
So far, so good, the story has a valuable and meaningful premise. Unfortunately, I found much of the mechanics of the storytelling to be a bit…mechanical? And somewhat frustrating and monotonous to read. Solomon’s linguistic skills, the actual writing itself, was solid enough. Somewhere between the characterization decisions she made and the development of relationships and interactions between the characters, combined with some awkward storytelling choices, left me feeling a bit cold and bored with the story.
For example, the main character is rather robotic in her personality. She takes everything very literally. One might think she was portrayed as having some profile such as Asperger Syndrome. As such, her decisions were almost always very frustrating and obtuse. Most of her interactions with other characters didn’t develop into deeper connections. And this was exacerbated by the storytelling technique where characters seemed to have fairly short and unsatisfying conversations. They always seemed to be leaving each other with unfinished communications, either running away before the conversation could be completed due to anger or being cutoff by some event that occurs or one individual leaving due to some urgent demand. In the end, this left me feeling disconnected from the characters. And it also felt like herky-jerky storytelling…the key plot points that characters communicate to each other get unnecessarily distributed throughout the story making it feel much longer than it needed to be. Some degree of frustration of the reader can be thematically appropriate and necessary. But as a pattern over the whole book, it made it feel too long and dare-I-say it, boring. I kept wanting to just get to the heart of the matter, and Solomon continually postponed it. It didn’t help matters that the main character’s childhood friend has been driven rather insane, making the story’s second most important character also hard to relate to or connect with. The third main character is the upper-class surgeon. While he had an interesting backstory, he never quite jelled for me. As written, he felt too mechanical.
Oh, and I wish the publisher had googled “An Unkindness of…” because this phrase is in the title of at least two other novels, making this less original than it seems.
This is a fantastic debut novel. Several hundred years in the past a starship left Earth fleeing an unnamed disaster. The Matilda is hurtling through space towards an unknown destination. All of humanities foibles were also loaded and unleashed with
From this setting a self-described neuroatypical autodidact haunts the ship's libraries and her own complicated familial history while seeking to exist on her own terms.
Like all great science fiction, this novel works as both a great story and chilling description of the world we inhabit. This novel will make you ache as you race to finish it, fearing the ending you expect.
I also deeply appreciated how the violence in the book, including sexual violence, is never sensationalized or gratuitous-- in fact, we often don't see the violent acts themselves, as Solomon focuses more on how Aster and the others cope with it in the moment and afterward. Other writers looking for how to approach violence honestly, without exploitation or sensationalism, should take note of how Solomon does it.
Just loved it.
I was hooked very early on. While I had some concerns about just how the ship had fallen into outright slavery so easily?/quickly? Aster was a magnificent protagonist. She's prickly and odd, and the few close relationships she has are COMPLICATED, but she's incredibly appealing, nonetheless. Partly it's her extreme medical knowhow -- blending folkloric home remedies with bootleg drug synthesis and her own secret herbarium/greenhouse/lab. And partly it is her prickliness in the face of a criminally unjust system -- her strategies for self-preservation make full use of all she has at her disposal, yet it isn't self-centered. As a healer she is constantly looking out for others as well.
What also stood out to me was the book's reverence for books and stories. Aster is often thinking of the myths her "auntie" told her growing up, and how they help her make sense of the world, and there is such a strong feeling of love in the scene in the library, the way books and notebooks and the act of reading are appreciated -- it warmed me whenever it came up.
This book was so ambitious in all the themes/issues it addressed, I couldn't possibly mention them all, but I particularly appreciated its take on gender and sex diversity, slavery and caste systems, the corruption of power, neuro-diversity, and science. Some of the world-building here is just phenomenal -- such as the baby "sun" and the rotating field decks.
I do have a few small criticisms, but they are SO MILD that I will only mention the one -- the main villain in this novel is so SPECTACULARLY evil. I wish he'd been given a tiny shred of humanity or at least a hint of origin of what made him that way.
Easily one of my favorite books read in 2017.
I'm seriously mad it's not on the shelf at my local bookstore.
Go read this now.
The strength of the book lies in its unusual and strongly drawn characters. Aster is a lower deck slave, but also a... well, one of the
Much of the book's story is Aster's search for information about her mother, tangled up with the quest for information about where the ship is going and how they can ever find home. I found the resolution of this surprising, and hadn't seen the twist coming!
Matilda is a thousand years into a space voyage with a world of
Aster is a field hand and also a brilliant developer and synthesizer of medicines. Her brilliant mother is dead, a suicide, and the book begins with Aster's attempts to learn what her mother knew and how she died. She is aided or sometimes hindered by her mad friend Giselle, her aunt Melusine, and the Surgeon General of the whole ship, Theo.
I confess that after a hundred pages or so, I stopped trying to follow explanations of how things worked and sometimes of how Aster thought, and just hung on for the ride. Many thanks to Early Reviewers for the opportunity to read this one now. I'll be waiting for whatever Rivers Solomon chooses to publish next.
This is not an easy book to read for the very reason why it is a book that everyone should read. Aster is a freak and an outsider. She is also a child looking for her mother and a woman wise beyond her years. She may be a 'monster', but she is very, very human. Through Aster's eye we see the worst that humanity can impose upon itself and we feel the hope and love that can redeem us all. This is a book that you will want to read many times and will be talked about for years to come.
It's hard for me to know quite how to review this one, because it sort of feels to me like a really good novel and kind of a meh one smooshed inextricably into each other. On the good side, the social commentary is decent, there are a few nicely imaginative world-building touches, and there are quite a few moments where I found the story or the writing or the characters really compelling.
The less satisfying aspects, though, are harder to articulate. Mostly, lots and lots of the details just failed to feel convincing to me, in a way that kept me from ever feeling fully immersed in this world. And the plot... Well, the plot, which involves the main character searching for secrets left behind by her mother, sort of stutters and splutters along, skipping over much of what seems to be the actual plot part of the plot. And I'm not entirely sure how I feel about the end, but I think I was hoping for something a bit, well, more.
It was an interesting reading experience, and it does some things I think are very much worth doing. I just wish I liked it more unreservedly than I did.
Unfortunately, this book seems to have a lot of that. Vestigial organs include:
• gender identity - Solomon creates a structure where children on one deck are all referred to as girls (until they did something to indicate that they weren't actually a girl) and on another deck all children are referred to gender neutrally. This is a perfectly legitimate thing to do, except that it doesn't seem to matter in terms of the plot, or anything else in the book. It just sits there, like the proverbial gun that is introduced in Act One, but fails to go off by Act Three.
• religion - Solomon seems to be trying to set up the system on the ship as being driven by a very strict theocracy, except aside from mentioning that leaders of the ship are supposed to given their power and authority by their god, religion doesn't actually seem to play much of a part of the story. Except one character engages in some ritual self-flagellation. There was that.
• neuroatypicality - Our main character, Aster, is an interesting person, who displays symptoms of something along the lines of Asperger's Syndrome. Whether that's the diagnosis Solomon intended Aster to have is neither nor there, because the question is why Aster is portrayed in this at all. The only plot point for which her symptoms seem relevant is to create tension when she can't understand the motivations of the Surgeon, and to therefore create wholly unnecessary and artificial tension between them.
To say that all of this detracted from the story as a whole is an understatement. If only the plot were strong enough to bear the weight of all that, but it's not. I could never quite figure out what was supposed to be driving the plot. Was it the plight of the people on the ship altogether, or specifically Aster's search for answers about her mother? Or was the latter supposed to inform the former in the task of pushing the story forward? I don't know, and by the time the book wrapped up, I didn't much care.
It is disturbing. I'm glad I read it, but I'm not sure how to classify this.
Don't pin your expectations on the jacket description. I don't feel this was "organized like the antebellum South" more than any other dictatorship. The "leaders imposed harsh" indignities and religious cant but were morally indifferent about the lives of the field hands. I kept waiting for hints of the "civil war" Aster was supposedly seeding, but that happened incidental to playing out her own sense of inevitability and responsibility for those who were harmed due to her actions.
I was reading this aloud to my son, but there was more and more violence and graphic crudities which I had to try to edit out. Not recommended for younger children. I feel like the violence was gratuitous--not on the part of the story, but on the part of the characters themselves and the story just related the events.
It definitely felt like Solomon was casting out her own ghosts in this writing. This is a book to tear open your guts, not to sugarcoat the ways lives are destructed.
Review based on a free reader's advance copy.
Not my kind of book
Solomon uses a style that reminded me a lot of when I read Beloved, though that was many years ago and I did my best to forget the experience at the time. It's very visceral, and it's a very personal choice for me to hate it, but I do.
I also despised most of the
As far as non-deliberate problems, I felt the worldbuilding was pretty weak. I also thought Aster's life, especially in the first 60% or so, was very schizophrenic and didn't fit together very well. I despised the other POVs at the beginning of every act.
I'm giving it two stars because I know a lot of the unpleasantness was intentional, but I can't say this was an enjoyable read.