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"1992: After a confrontation at a riot grrl concert, seventeen-year-old Beth finds herself in a car with her friend's abusive boyfriend dead in the backseat, agreeing to help her friends hide the body. This murder sets Beth and her friends on a path of escalating violence and vengeance as they realize many other young women in the world need protecting too. 2022: Determined to use time travel to create a safer future, Tess has dedicated her life to visiting key moments in history and fighting for change. But rewriting the timeline isn't as simple as editing one person or event. And just when Tess believes she's found a way to make an edit that actually sticks, she encounters a group of dangerous travelers bent on stopping her at any cost. Tess and Beth's lives intertwine as war breaks out across the timeline - a war that threatens to destroy time travel and leave only a small group of elites with the power to shape the past, present, and future. Against the vast and intricate forces of history and humanity, is it possible for a single person's actions to echo throughout the timeline?"--Publisher description.… (more)
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Thousands of years ago, people discovered 5 disks - almost destroyed by the elements but still functional - allowing people to travel back in
The novel follows two main line - one starting in 2022 and jumping around from there and another starting in 1992 and moving linearly. As one may expect, they are not independent but it takes most of the novel to realize just how they connect and why.
Edits to history are not a joke matter - they delete the future and reconfigure everyone's memories - and only the person doing the edit remembers the past. The "now" of 2022 which is the main story in the novel seems similar to our time (plus the time machine) until you start seeing the small differences - Raqmu never fell under Greek and Roman rule so never became Petra, Harriet Tubman became a senator at one point, California never lost the prefix Alta from its name and Comstock won across time- abortion was never legal in the United States. And somewhere in that future, the Daughters of Harriet were born - a group of scientists that is trying to change the past and give more freedom to women (and other persecuted genders). But as is normal with history, there is also another group that wants the opposite - complete reversal of any rights for anyone that is not a man. And so the Edit Wars started - although the opposing fraction does not just want to change things - they also want to lock the world in a single timeline.
Most of the novel happens in Chicago in 1892 (and the years after that); the 1992 story happens in Irvine, Alta California where Beth and her friends are finishing high school and going to college with all the craziness of the era (and its alternative music scene). Add a few trips to the Ordovician Period, 13th century BC and a guest from a few hundred years in the future sent back to try to save humanity (or the female part of it anyway) and you have the temporal knot that needs a lot of tugging in all kinds of directions.
If you remove the time travel, you get two stories - one of the Chicago expo and its Midway theaters (and Comstock and his... actions); one of 1992 California. And both work on their own. Joining them together and mixing them with the time travelers make them even stronger ones and the 1992 story serves as a control of what is getting changed earlier.
By the end of the novel, the California of 1992 seem closer to our timeline. But in order to get there, a lot of bad things need to happen - the novel has some pretty brutal scenes that may turn some people away. But they fit the narrative. And the story.
And somewhere along the line, there is always the lingering question - should we do that? And if editing can change the past and future, what is really the past and future. It is the priestess at the very end of the novel that will give us some answers -- and they won't come as a surprise.
I really enjoyed this novel - despite some predictability here and there, Annalee Newitz found a new way to write on a topic that a lot of authors had explored. Throughout the novel, the group starts their meetings with "I remember a time when" - reporting the times that everyone lost. One time they lost a member. Other times they lost parts of history. At the very last meeting, a few of them start the same way "I remember a time when abortion was not legal". Because in that novel, the world changed.
It is a credit to the author that she does not go into the moral part of that question - the novel and the fight is about the right of a person to make their own choices. Because of that, it may not be for everyone - but if you are not scared of the topic, I would recommend this novel.
Where the book fell down for me was the dialogue. Characters are constantly speaking unnaturally, sometimes for expository purposes, sometimes to make a Very Important Point, and sometimes for no particular reason. Upon entering a college dorm room for the first time: “Hi, roomie! I’m Rosa Sanchez, from Salinas. Do you care whether you get top or bottom? Because I don’t care.”
Despite the dialogue concerns, I’d still happily recommend it.
There was a lot of plot in this book -- time travel gives a writer a lot of potential settings to work with -- and the author mostly handled it well. I thought her world of 1892 was not as well-written as the other sections, however, particularly the story of Beth and her friends, which took a while to intersect with the theme of the book. I liked the focus on the morality and potential affect of making changes to past timelines, as detailed when the Daughters would recount the things only they now remembered from the past. the time-travel mechanism was odd and never quite fully explained, but it functioned fairly well for purposes of the story. It's refreshing, in a genre that often relies on dystopia and great-man hero characters, to find a narrative speaking for the power of women, LGBTQ people, and their allies to work collectively to make the world a better place.
I loved the sci-fi concept that made this universe unique, relative to ours. I loved the conflict around that universe. I loved the characters and their story. The whole book felt beautifully connected.
It has a lot in it that's dark and
The less-than-good remains that I set a really high bar for time travel plots and this story really doesn't get over this bar. If we had a world with known time machines I just can't believe that access would be that easy to achieve. I also think it likely that an exercise in having an "edit" war would likely result in our time warriors being marooned in an alternate world where there was no time travel. Also, the militant patriarchalists of the story could have been better developed, even if understanding this sort of person in real life often seems like a fool's errand. I also tend to agree that the dialogue is clunky in places. On the whole, this novel probably needed another pass of editing.
Some parts of the book were a bit clunky, but overall, I liked it and it was a good plane read.
I appreciated a bit more of the science about time travel, the example of people not being able to go back in time to talk
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