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Fantasy. Fiction. LGBTQIA+ (Fiction.) HTML:Groundbreaking epic fantasy series in Mercedes Lackey�??s Valdemar universe �?� Lambda-Award winning novels with heartfelt high adventure and magic Though Vanyel has been born with near-legendary abilities to work both Herald and Mage magic, he wasn�??t no part in such things. Nor does he seek a warrior�??s path, wishing instead to become a Bard. Yet such talent as his, if left untrained, may prove a menace not only to Vanyel but to others as well. So he is sent to be fostered with his aunt, Savil, one of the fame Herald-Mages of Valdemar. But, strong-willed and self-centered, Vanyel is a challenge which even Savil cannot master alone. For soon he will become the focus of frightening forces, lending his raw magic to a spell that unleashes terrifying wyr-hunters on the land. And by the time Savil seeks the assistance of a Shin�??a�??in Adept, Vanyel�??s wild talent may have already grown beyond anyone�??s ability to contain, placing Vanyel, Savil, and Valdemar it… (more)
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This was the first Valdemar book I
Ladies and gentlement, the book that started it all.
This is also the turning point in the Valdemar series, where you can really tell that Lackey has found her voice and has settled into a comfortable and refined style that carries her through the rest of the books she writes. It's smooth, it's detailed, and it's captivating. The way she handles deep emotional scenes is wonderful, and I'm always entertained by the way she writes the thoughts and observations of the character whose viewpoint we're seeing. Unlike some, who will only write the important and relevent thoughts of a character, Lackey will take the time and space to have them seem realistic in their random observations and jokes and misconceptions. Some may consider it a waste of space, but I consider it a sign that the author has a good handle on how people actually behave and think.
True, there are problems with this book. It has its inconsistancies, as I think every Valdemar novel has by this point, but it even makes a few internal flubs, such as referring to a period of 60 minutes as an hour instead of the series-established candlemark. But the internal errors are few and far between, and most of them are only evident if you're really paying attention for them.
Maybe people who dislike this trilogy do so because Vanyel's a whiny little brat and they can't stand his emo tendancies. I have to admit, they do have a point. Even other characters point out that he's a brat. In fairness to him as a character, though, a large part of his bratty nature was posturing, another large part was because he had a screwed up set of circumstances and issue that don't end up getting resolved until well into adulthood, and thirdly, he was 15! Think back to when you were 15, and I bet you were brattier then than you are now. For this, I cut the guy some slack.
And luckily for me, the way Lackey writes pulls me through the story so swiftly that it doesn't feel like an entire book has passed before I get to see him grow up and mature!
Even though this book has its issues, it will still always hold a special place in my heart and on my shelves, and I still highly recommend this trilogy to those who enjoy Lackey's other works, and to those who want to give Valdemar a try but don't want to sit through a less-polished writing style.
After the hold’s arms master
I love this book. It’s an adventure of the best kind – an outcast discovers he really does have magic powers and ends up doing good in the world. It’s great for mature kids aged sixteen and up, due to sexuality and violence. There are themes of overcoming obstacles, homosexuality, and love that are written in a respectful and loving manner. Every library ought to have this book.
Lackey goes through pains to show us why he acts the way he does. She is successful to some degree, but her inability to present Vanyel as a consistent, realistic individual destroys the unheroic yet ultimately brave character she was going for. Without giving too much away, Vanyel is faced with one of the worst tragedies anyone can imagine. This understandably crushes him. Yet pages before, he showed deep hurt at the knowledge he was disliked by his peers. He showed the same hurt when he found out he could not fulfill his lifelong dream. Again and again Vanyel shows us the smallest slight will send him off balance, so that when real heartache comes to him, it seems very shallow. Vanyel seems so self-obsessed, it was hard to believe he was capable of loving another, let alone the level of love he found. Lackey seems to understand this, and actually tries to explain it away directly in the book by having characters Vanyel is around wonder the same thing. Unfortunately, pointing out your own mistakes as you write is no substitute for creating consistent characterization.
Other than the unlikable main character, the book suffers from many other issues. Magic's Pawn suffers from an unfathomable lack of magic. We really don't see the magic of Lackey's world until we near the end of the book and not coincidentally it is the end that is the most enjoyable to read. This book could work without the magic, and that means the magic was not really necessary. In a world with magic, we have to recognize magic as a real and present force in the lives of the characters. To Lackey, it is background noise.
This is the symptom of a larger problem. Lackey did not spend a great deal of time fleshing out her world, at least at first. This is a world very similar to our own. Again, when we reach the end, we get a glimpse of a part of her world that is truly unique, but by then it is too late. This is a world with priests, Kings, lords and peasants. Haven is their version of heaven. You get the picture. There are mentions of other religions and other lands. Hints at a larger history and cultural diversity that Lackey may explore in other novels. But, if you are looking for quality world building, you won't find it here.
All of this could be overlooked, if the writing was at a decent level. Unfortunately, the plotting seems choppy and lazy at times. This is a series of events, not a fully realized story. The antagonists are barely mentioned and only appear in a handful of scenes. Other than a few lines, we see nothing of their motivation and in the case of the final foe Vanyel faces, nothing at all. Even in books where the antagonists are motivated only by their own inherent evil, we get more development than in this book, where they are only present long enough to do their evil deeds and die quickly. This issue is made all the worse because the magic system is poorly developed and unoriginal.
I'm very sad to say, this just isn't a very good book.
Lackey clearly has skill as a writer. And that's what makes it all the more disappointing. The last few chapters are actually an interesting read, but it is not worth reading the book to get there. I wish it were just a matter of taste. Most books I review negatively I make sure to say were not to my taste, but others may enjoy them. This is not one of those books. I would recommend this book to no one.
(One final note: I think a lot of this book's praise comes from the homosexuality of the main character. Perhaps if I were homosexual, I would be able to appreciate the uniqueness of this book in a genre where there aren't a lot of gay characters, least of all main characters. I give Lackey credit for this. But if I were in their shoes, I would want a quality book that had such characters, and I certainly wouldn't be satisfied with this.)
Those themes are important in this book and trilogy, and I
However, although I do think this theme is part of what gives the Last Herald Mage novels emotional punch, it doesn't pound the narrative to pieces; the book doesn't feel preachy. It's just a good adventure, fantasy story, set in a pseudo-medieval world of "heralds" who are a police/military force chosen by seeming horses, magical creatures that can see into someone's character and are full partners--it's simply a good read.
I often feel that this book is very bittersweet. And I like that. This isn't one of those books where nothing bad really happens to the main characters. I've read this book multiple times and I haven't gotten tired of it yet!
I picked up this series because I was in the process of writing a fantasy novel with a gay hero and I wanted to see what other works were out there. I had never read Ms. Lackey's work, so I didn't know what to expect. I was not just pleasantly surprised by this trilogy,
This trilogy gave me a great deal of inspiration to push on with my own fantasy aspirations. I owe Misty a big hug if we ever meet face to face. I highly recommend these three books. Whether you're gay or straight, you'll find them an excellent read and, like me, you'll be sorry to reach that last page.
A couple other things I really enjoyed about the book, the plot and circumstances of which I don’t feel I can even overview for fear of spoilers, are the Companions and the Tayledras (particularly Moondance), who were all very interesting characters.
While this is listed as the first book of The Last Herald Mage series, it seems to be primarily based in an already established world, leaving me to wonder if some of the side-characters mentioned have their own books as well. Despite this, I understood the book and didn't feel lost, just curious. I fully intend to read the next book of the series just as soon as I can get my hands on it.
Shattered to be judged Giftless - talented enough to be a minstrel, but as his father's heir, that way is barred to him. Gradually, Vanyel realizes that he's attracted to one of Savil's mage students, and although the two share a lifebond, their love is ill-fated. Vanyel's true path lies somewhere far different.
Not my favorite of Lackey's series, but well-written. Vanyel's just a bit whiny and self-loathing for my taste. Thankfully, he improves in the sequels, but not before I always find myself aching for a two-by-four.
Snack lit rating: comfort food
If you enjoy fantasy, this is well worth the read.
I find Lackey's world captivating, her writing compulsively readable, and her characters largely enjoyable. Vanyel got on my nerves from time to time for being a 15-year-old dude with a ton of angst, and while it turns out I am willing to believe 15-year-old dudes really can be that angsty, he had a lot of Gary Stu going on as well, what with the "my father hates me and doesn't understand me no one understands me and oh I have no talent and my life is ruined forever wait what? I have all dah powerz and now everyone loves me?" (Followed a by a lot more angst. Un-spoiler: he doesn't really get over his angst until about 20 pages from the end.)
My only other complaint is the way Lackey uses italics to emphasize things. So many things. (See what I did there?) She apparently doesn't trust her reader to understand her sentences in exactly the way that she writes them, and sure enough, there were dozens of times where I tripped over an italicized word because I, myself, would not have bothered with the emphasis in that particular sentence. And then when she was anti-italicizing things for emphasis while her characters were mind-speaking in italics? GAH. That was terrible.
But I'm over it. I enjoyed the book, and I'll read many more of them, I expect.
When I first read these books I felt that they were very preachy in the way the worst of American story telling can be as to how to live but this time through I was able to ignore that and enjoy the story.
The plot revolves around Vanyel, a young man misunderstood by his family and the people surrounding him, with his sister initialy being the only