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Royal Navy Series: Book One An officer, a gentleman... and a sodomite. The first two earn him honor and respect, the third may cost him his life. David Archer realizes how hopeless his attraction to his fellow midshipman is from the moment a newly-arrived William Marshall challenges a sexually abusive shipmate to a duel - and shoots him dead. To Marshall, the Navy is his one chance to move beyond his humble beginnings. While others spend shore leave carousing, he curls up with a navigation text. When they and their captain are abducted, Archer and Marshall become pawns in a renegade's sadistic game. To protect the man he loves, David Archer chooses to face his own demons of past abuse returned in a different form. When Marshall learns of Archer's sacrifice, he discovers what he feels for Davy runs stronger and deeper than friendship. He's in love, for the first time in his life, and he wants to know all about this new emotion. But first they must escape. Only then will they find out if they can preserve their love without losing their lives.… (more)
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I will say
What William Marshall is unaware of is the fact that David Archer has been in love with him for years, ever since William killed in a duel a man who had abused David and other young men under his command. David has no hope that William could ever have reciprocating feelings for him and given the penalty should his affection ever be revealed, David contents himself with being William's friend. However, while they are held for ransom Adrian's threats against William spur David into making a painful sacrifice for the protection of his fellow officers. When William discovers by accident what David is suffering on his behalf he finds that not only does he greatly admire his friend and fellow shipman, but that his feelings are more than friendship.
I had thought, knowing how much detail of this book is given to the historical/nautical theme, that I might get a little bored. This did not happen. The "romance" part of this book does not really get introduced until a little over halfway through but the writing, storyline and excellent characterization more than carries the book in a most satisfying fashion. I never had the feeling I was waiting for something more interesting to happen. The romance wasn't tawdry or sickly sweet and although some of the scenes did get a bit graphic towards the end of the book, which I did feel a little uncomfortable with (but that's just me), overall I have to say I really, really enjoyed this story. I found William and David to be very likable characters and am considering reading the sequel to this book, "Winds of Change".
One reviewer noted that he expected this to be more explicit and then it hit him on the head. This is true, but don't think you'll be bored waiting for that to happen The story is exciting and well-written. The sex is tasteful and touching. There is also a mystery about the identity of the pirate captain. Our heroes (all three!) examine evidence, and collect clues much like sleuths. All this keeps the reader involved. Buy this!
For some reason I felt it fell short
True the situation merritted all of that - our heroes : A tomented officer with a past of sexual abuse (gasp! In a gay historical romance - WHY I NEVER!) and his dashing comander whome he is secretly in love with are kidnapped by pirates and have to make their escape. Tormented officer is chosen by pirate captain as a bed catamite and dashing comander finds he is equally in love. Lust blossoms in the brig as they slowly plot their escape.
And that is the problem. SLOWLY is the leading word here. There is only so much you can achieve in terms of adventure when you restrict your story environment to a sloop. I am not a maritime expert myself beyond the "PHUWAR! TOP SAILS *HUMPS MAIN MAST*" reaction (I blame the Onedin Line and my dad obssesion of building models of tall ships) but even I know that boats by nature - GO SOMWHERE. Most of the story was happening in a cell or in the Pirate captain quaters with occasional excursions to another cell and up on deck for some flogging...which was the highlight of the book for me because it led to some healing and comforting and smex by virtue of its angst inducing qualities.
I also didn't like the villain. You might think that it is normal not to like the bad guy but it isn't for me. I like my villains entertaining. Either total vicious bastards that compel you by facinating you with the inventiveness of their cruelty or rogues who are insane but somehow likable through their chaotic lack of control. They need to scare me. I wasn't scared. I thought the Pirate was a vein little peackock who talked too much and never allowed us to see just HOW he molested his prey. It was all glossed over and left me feeling that the writer didn't really like the character either which made him unconvincing.
His crew wasn't much better. By the time the escape and rescue happened I was wondering if they can buckle their shoes on their own because some of the lame stories that our heros fed them wouldn't convince a seven year old...it was all rushed and botched.
In contrast the two main characters are TOO good. They seem to have no flow apart from over sensitivity and lack of confidence.
It isn't a BAD book - it simply could have been more. I wasn't left with a feeling of satisfaction by the end of it but I know some people loved it because they recomended it too me. I just wasn't gripped. it may have been well researched but I would have prefered a few historical flaws and more escapism and drama.
I can't believe I'm saying
Really, that's the feel of most of the book. Competently written, nothing too interesting. Nothing too bad. But of course, 'nothing too bad,' can be a real compliment in this genre, sometimes. The characters weren't completely void of personality, but they were pretty bland. The supporting characters are very weak, but the main characters are the focus anyway. Unfortunately, while they had more personality than the others, they didn't really have any particularly interesting traits or quirks. Through the beginning, I had a terrible time keeping who was talking straight, continually having to remind myself which name went with which character, as their actions and dialogue didn't much hint at the answer. When the lower self-esteem of one of them becomes more apparent, I was finally able to keep them straight, but it was a token difference. They're just both terribly good, slightly snarky, talented people. The only time there's much sexual tension is a few paragraphs before any of teh pr0n starts.
Almost all of the book is spent with the characters locked in a cell together. None of the small revelations about their situation or their captors make it much more interesting. They sit around, and plot escape, every once in a while coming across something that might help. You'd think that'd mean it's more about a psychological battle then, and it is more of that than anything else, but it's nothing spectacular on that area, either.
All the same, there's nothing really eye-roll inducing. I imagine the easier-to-please types (and I mean that in a positive way ^^ ...this time ^_^) would be quite happy with this book. At first I was even thinking about keeping it on my shelf, but I think I'll release it... Will probably be better appreciated somewhere else.
Though it did certainly surprise me with a smile every once in a while:
"We're giving you a razor, but you 'ave to put it back out before we opens the door."
"They're afraid we'll leap out and shave them, " Marshall said.
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By that point they were playing chess on a board they'd drawn with a bit of chalk Archer had found in his pocket. Pawns, single stalks, were no trouble, but the other chessmen tended to fall to pieces. This element of unpredictability made the game more interesting.
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"There. I'm sneering. Think it's repulsive enough?"
"Davy, it's pitch-black in here."
"Well, I can't sneer any louder."