The Viper of Milan: A Romance of Lombardy

by Marjorie Bowen

Other authorsGraham Greene (Introduction), Hilary Abrahams (Illustrator)
Paperback, 1963

Status

Available

Call number

813

Collection

Publication

Peacock Books - Penguin (1963), Paperback, 283 pages

Description

Set in fourteenth-century Italy, the story is about the enmity between two princes, Visconti, the evil Duke of Milan and Mastino della Scala, the dispossessed Duke of Verona. First published in 1906 when its author was only twentyyears-old, the book was hailed by many critics as an exemplary first novel. The New York Times called the Viper's first US publication a triumph: 'This sounds like extravagant praise, but it will be the exceptional person who will not be aroused to unwonted enthusiasm by Miss Bowen's work.'

User reviews

LibraryThing member jon1lambert
Nice cover by Vernon Soper, strange red head with green gloves and stained-glass window.
LibraryThing member PhilSyphe
This novel set in Italy in the 1340s enticed me early on, but lost me a little during the final chapters.

It’s one of those books that are better in parts than on the whole. While the author’s descriptive passages are vivid when focused on the surroundings of a scene, they’re less visual a
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couple of times when she describes action between characters, especially during a violent episode towards the end.

Without giving anything away, I’ll just say that a crucial violent incident was not portrayed well. In fact, the way she goes about it is confusing.

While the characters are believable, they can be too melodramatic at times. This is often because of the choice of language the author decided to use for dialogue. Here’s an example:

'Go, and take thy fool with thee, and keep from my sight.'

This old form of speech is irritating. No need to be so authentic. Sentences like the above and 'Thinkest thou he will get the horses?' tend to slow the narrative down.

Worse still is Ms Bowen’s inclination to mix the syntax up to add to the old way of speaking. Several times I was forced to re-read something to grasp its meaning. Here’s an example:

'Answer! Where got the fool this?'

But apart from the above criticisms, “The Viper of Milan” is not a bad read, and at times it's quite compelling.
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Language

Original language

English
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