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Serving his king during a time of realm expansion, nobleman's son Nevare Burvelle finds his promising career compromised by unexpected prejudice at the King's Cavalry Academy and the discovery that he is being rendered a pawn by the magical plains folk. By the author of the Farseer and Tawny Man series. Nevare Burvelle is the second son of a second son, destined from birth to carry a sword. The wealthy young noble will follow his father, newly made a lord by the King of Gernia, into the cavalry, training in the military arts at the elite King's Cavella Academy in the capital city of Old Thares. Bright and well-educated, an excellent horseman with an advantageous engagement, Nevare's future appears golden. But as his Academy instruction progresses, Nevare begins to realize that the road before him is far from straight. The old aristocracy looks down on him as the son of a "new noble" and, unprepared for the political and social maneuvering of the deeply competitive school and city, the young man finds himself entangled in a web of injustice, discrimination, and foul play. In addition, he is disquieted by his unconventional girl-cousin Epiny, who challenges his heretofore unwavering world view, and by the bizarre dreams that haunt his nights. For twenty years the King's cavalry has pushed across the grasslands, subduing and settling its nomads and claiming the territory in Gernia's name. Now they have driven as far as the Barrier Mountains, home to the Speck people, a quiet, forest-dwelling folk who retain the last vestiges of magic in a world that is rapidly becoming modernized. From childhood Nevare has been taught that the Specks are a primitive people to be pitied for their backward ways, and feared for their indigenous diseases, including the deadly Speck plague, which has ravaged the frontier towns and military outposts. The Dark Evening brings the carnival to Old Thares, and with it an unknown magic, and the first Specks Nevare has ever seen.… (more)
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Hobb's world building is as good as always. This new place was a delight to discover. It's part Victorian England, part antebellum American
The characterization, on the other hand, just didn't click for me. I had trouble engaging with Nevare. He's so committed to his own worldview, and is completely unwilling to accept anything unusual or strange. He's incredibly ethnocentric, as are most of those who surround him. I felt for him, and even teared up a few times, but I had trouble investing much in him. I felt awkward rooting for his soldier self because of the ethnocentrism and the limited worldview, but I couldn't really root for the magical part of him because of the things it did. Hobb is among my favourite authors because she (usually) excels at creating characters who change and grow in believable ways. Nevare doesn't really grow as the book progresses. And I'll tell you, I'm gonna be hella disappointed if he doesn't start making some progress in the next book.
I also found that there was a lot of unnecessary repetition. Hobb tells us the same things over and over again. Perhaps I'd have found this helpful if I were a slower reader, or if I had trouble remembering details. As a fast reader with an excellent memory for details, I found it tiresome. There were also a fair number of typographical errors in my edition, (the UK trade paperback), including missed words and places where similar words were exchanged for one another. There were enough of them that they lifted me out of the story on a fairly regular basis.
I sound like I didn't enjoy the book. I really, really did... but it didn't entirely work for me. And, to be honest, I'm not sure whether to recommend it or not. Hobb fans seem evenly divided over whether or not they enjoy ed it. I myself am divided over whether or not I ought to have enjoyed it. I'd say, borrow it from the library or from a friend before you rush out and buy it.
This entire book felt like it was someone's backstory that filled in for the actual novel to be
No, not a good book in the least.
One hundred pages in, and the single thing I enjoyed was the dedication:
To Caffeine and Sugar
my companions through many a
long night of writing
The first thing that strikes you all through the book is how much she put into worldbuilding. It's one of the most vividly realized worlds in fantasy, in my opinion. You have Gernia, the protagonist's homeland, with an ambitious King and his plans of driving expansion eastward through the land of Specks. You have Landsing, who defeated Gernia many years ago and took many of their strategic towns. The conflict between the old and the new nobility. The Plainspeople and their constant warring with both the Specks and the Gernians. The mysterious Specks with their unknown magics. I could write a book on the world alone, suffice to say it's terrific to immerse yourself into.
Then there's Nevare. Upright, honorable, and about as rigid as a pillar of stone. Much of the whole trilogy goes on within him, his thoughts and fears and self-doubting introspection. He strives to do the right thing so hard that sometimes he can be difficult to sympathize with, for some readers. I wasn't one of them. For myself, I found the introspection to be as much "the story" as the external events. His gradual discovery of the person he is, his devotion to his country and family, and his limitless perseverance to set things right were all wonderful elements of his character.
Other characters were all memorable, his cousin, his friends, his family. I won't comment on each of them, but you will know them as real characters as you've ever met. Top notch characterization from Robin Hobb. Dialogue was beautiful too.
The story is sometimes slow, I'll own that. But while not much was going on from page to page in some places, I was still flying through them given the superior fluidity of the writing. I wasn't bothered by the pace, I was glad I was in that world and with those characters.
The plot I'll keep a surprise, I hate spoilers more than anything. I'll only tell you it's engaging and more large-scaled than you can guess from the first book. I've read the whole trilogy, remember?
I'm supposed to mention the drawbacks, aren't I? I won't say there are none. As I see it, most reader complaints were based on three points:
1. The Farseer protagonist was WAY cooler.
2. Slow paced story.
3. Repetition of info.
From my point of view, the only issue I had with the book was the relatively limited action. Events were sparse along the first book, giving much more space to description and linear progress of Nevare's life. It wasn't a huge problem, but every now and then you'd wish to see some more action, some better view of the fantastic world all around. Part of the reason for that is how NEW the author tried to go for everything. New plot type, new character frame, new world setting, an almost experimental trilogy. She had to go slow, structured, and with gradual exposition to lay it all in a way the reader can be acquainted with. The other part was the plot itself, it had to go that way. It's so much Nevare's story that the trilogy could have been named just that, "Nevare's Story". You have to follow his steps and skip nothing from cover to cover throughout the three books to reach the ultimate ending.
All in all, a terrific new sort of story in one the most beautiful fantasy worlds I've ever seen. Highly recommended with the condition you buy all three books to get the greater story. As for Nevare, you either love him or hate him.
I think the problem was that I could just not connect with the protagonist. The poor guy seemed to have no control over his life as was just pulled
I cannot recommend except to die hard Hobb fans.
Characters: The central figure starts out as a nine-year-old and
Style: It's not as dense as the Farseer trilogy, and it feels as though there is no real purpose to the story. It's as if Hobb was writing for the deadline here and not for the story. There is no life in this book.
Plus: Interesting setting at the beginning of industrialization.
Minus: The writing is uninspored and drags.
Summary: Far from a must-read.
Set in an expanding, imperialist
I find the amount of "Nevare is far too different from Fitz" criticism from some Farseer fans frankly surprising. I don't think it's an entirely fair comparison; the stories and worlds are drastically different, and therefore require different characters. Transplanting Fitz's brain and personality into a Gernian body and slapping on a vanity name-tag would have been a cheap ploy. Not to mention a disservice to readers,
None of the characters are particularly sympathetic. I never felt drawn into the story. I couldn't quite tell who I was supposed to be cheering for, which makes it hard to care who wins. The ending was unsatisfying, and left me with no desire to read the rest of
Disappointing, after how fantastic her other books have been.
I don't think one of her ideas could work at all, first sons take their fathers
Already in the beginning the reader can guess, that the main plot will start when the main
Perhaps I expected too much of it, having chosen this one above so many others in London's book-stores. First time hobb has disappointed me, but I will still look forward to next parts in hopes the plot will become more interesting, since the other half of the book was't that bad at all.
This one is
So far, so straightforward. Except of course the plains weren't empty. The last remnants of the plains tribes are living in reservations or learning a new life as peasant farmers or herdsmen under the new landholders. And the old aristocracy are not happy about the shift in the balance of power, and believe the eastward expansion should not have been prioritised over the old old war with the rival civilisation to the west. The cavalry charge eastward has run into the Barrier Mountains. The tribespeople here are stronger, and have a more dangerous magic. The forts and outposts on the fringes of the mountains suffer regular outbreaks of a virulent plague, and from their holding on one of the main routes east young Nevare regularly watches as bright troops of cavalry ride east to glory and wagon loads of cripples stagger west to die. It's easy to imagine the characters and landscape, you just need to dredge up some John Ford/John Wayne Seventh Cavalry movies. Nevare isn't John Wayne though, he is the prissy young officer who knows nowt save honour. His father is vaguely aware that this is a shortcoming, and in order to give Nevare a head start at the Academy he decides to give him a practical education. As part of this, he sends him on some sort of Outward Bound course with a local Native Gernian. Dewara of the Kidona has his own agenda for Nevare’s future, however, and so our story really starts. The bulk of this book takes place at the Academy (think West Point), and forms a self-contained story. Given that it is advertised as the first part of a trilogy, though, I guess I'm free to speculate that there is a “ novice officer in the field” to come. But based on the author’s proven originality in both developing characters and devising logical but surprising plots, I’m reluctant to second-guess the plot of book three.
The book is narrated by Nevare – as he is both naive and slightly prudish, you as reader have to expend some effort in working out what's really going on, and the motivations of other characters. The author’s done it very well, so it isn't that difficult, but you do have to pay attention. The fellow students at the Academy, the instructors and the internal politics are all well-defined, lovable or hateful as appropriate, with lots of twists and turns and excellent dramatic crises. The magical aspect is woven in well, it isn't intrusive, and sits logically in the plot structure. No random “ with one wave of his wand she was free” rubbish, it's much more about the spirituality of different cultures, and some of the practical aspects of shamanism. There's also quite a lot of discussion about the roles and goals of women, especially intelligent women, in such a restrictive society, and what happens when you force young men from all levels of society into predefined roles. Especially when they know that their success or failure will determine what happens to their bloodline for ever.
The only criticism I have to make is that the texture perhaps wasn't as rich as I remember her previous books being - but I'd need to reread the first ones of the other trilogies to check whether that texture wasn't built up during the whole body of work, and if the first ones were less complex across-the-board.
Overall, it was a really good book, the traditional “ couldn't put it down” - which meant staying up all night, as it is physically a big book and difficult to read in bed. I would recommend it, especially if you’re not a traditional fantasy reader or if you like Firefly/Serenity or other Western/SF crossovers – or even if you like John Wayne movies. It certainly isn’t full of elves and dwarves and magical bits and bobs, the heroes are as likely to be engineers or mathematicians as brave warriors, and the women are Real People. The main reason not to read it now is that it's only just out in hardback, which means ages to wait for the next one. You could always fill in the time by reading her other trilogies, though!
I think the problem is that the trope of "harsh cadet officer academy" is overplayed.
In addition, I'm not sure the apparently dominant culture would survive as described. It's an incredibly strongly caste ridden society believing wholly in predestination (the second son of a noble will be a soldier regardless of all else).
Despite these reservations, and I remember them vaguely from the first time of reading, I found I was interested enough in some of the characters and their stories that I want to read book 2, but it's not one of Robin Hobb's best, by quite some way.
Minus points for the scar thingy. You're already in Harry Potter teritory with boarding school, the scar that connects you to your magical enemy was a bit much.
But I think that in her ambition to invent such a new and fertile world she forgot to include something crucial: a story. Things happen and conflict abounds but none of it engaged me particularly. I empathized with the hero well enough, but Hobb appears to have spent all her energy on aspects of his situation that didn't interest me and then glossed over the parts that I found potentially gripping.
Maybe it was the dreamworld stuff. I'm not a big fan of dreamscape magic. Or maybe it was the sometimes subtly discordant notes of male culture, duty, honor and, well, "guy culture" stuff that just didn't quite ring completely true to me. Writing about groups of young men training for the military and forced to cooperate while actually competing with each other is pretty ambitious psychological territory for a woman writer to tackle, no different than if I was to try to write about the she-politics at a debutante ball, and ballsy enough to do so from the perspective of a female character in the thick of the maneuvering.
Whatever the reason, this had more promise than was actually delivered.
magic system.