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When Captain Kyle Mercer of the Army's elite Delta Force disappeared from his post in Afghanistan, a video released by his Taliban captors made international headlines. But circumstances were murky: Did Mercer desert before he was captured? Then a second video sent to Mercer's Army commanders leaves no doubt: the trained assassin and keeper of classified Army intelligence has willfully disappeared. When Mercer is spotted two years later in Caracas, Venezuela by an old army buddy, top military brass task Scott Brodie and Maggie Taylor of the Criminal Investigation Division fly to Venezuela and bring Mercer back to America, dead or alive. Brodie knows this is a difficult mission, made more difficult by his new partner's inexperience and by his suspicion that Maggie Taylor is reporting to the CIA.… (more)
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DP Lyle, award-winning author of the Jake Longly and Cain/Harper thriller series
After Kyle Mercer
Navigating the corruption in Venezuela heightens the tension of every situation. The local currency is worthless, the people are starving, theft, murder, bribery is an every day, every minute activity. Oh yeah, our heroes are thrown in the thick of it and they find themselves in one insane situation after another. From their arrival at the airport to their transport to El Dorado the safest hotel in Caracas, to a whorehouse in one of the poorest slums, Brodie and Taylor don’t need to do something stupid to find themselves in trouble, it finds them everywhere they look, everywhere they go. And this is before they start the hunt for the fugitive Mercer. They go here, they go there, they look around, they are chased, they do the chasing, they shoot it out and then shoot it out again for over 400 pages, which felt a bit too long,
DeMille, as always, is observant, well informed and allows us a close up look at the Army’s Criminal Investigation Division (CID), Defense Intelligence Agency (DIA), the the US Embassy in Caracas, the nefarious CIA plotting and scheming to accomplish those goals we will never understand, and the political culture of Venezuela under the Madura regime.
Thank you NetGalley and Simon & Schuster for an advance copy.
A sighting of Mercer in Caracas
But there may be more to the Kyle Mercer story than anyone knows.
Strong characters, unexpected plot twists, and non-stop action keep the pages turning in this pulse-pounding narrative. It is a story of war, a story of impossible choices. It’s gritty and filled with the hopelessness of a population mired in poverty in a nation poised on the edge of becoming a failed state. The strong, well-described sense of place anchors the story.
Unfortunately, this powerful narrative finds itself mired down by a considerable excess of gratuitous expletives, an annoying overabundance of double entendres and sophomoric sexual innuendo, and far too much over-the-top graphic violence that tends to pull the reader out of the story. Leaving some things to the reader’s imagination isn’t necessarily a bad thing. Future books in the series would benefit from omitting the puerile inferences and the unwarranted crass language.
Recommended.
Magnolia Taylor and Scott Brody are partners working for the Army’s Criminal Investigation Command or CID. Their assignment is to find a deserter, Captain Kyle Mercer. After he left his post and unit, he was
The search for Mercer took Brody and Taylor to Venezuela and a world of extreme poverty. The citizens were desperate and their lives were empty. The government and military were corrupt. The police were compromised. Brody and Taylor witnessed sex slavery, child sex trafficking, violent gangs, robbery and murder! As they followed the trail to the deserter, they faced constant danger. Ultimately, they traveled to a remote jungle to find his hideout. They discovered his camp where he kept women to pleasure the men and trained soldiers to obstruct the efforts of the United States as it tried to interfere in the country. Everywhere they went, they faced danger. They found that their plans were thwarted as their identities had been discovered, and their enemies were waiting for them.
The book moves very slowly and for a good portion of the book, it seems to go nowhere, chapter after chapter. Even when it finally ends, there seem to be loose ends that are not tied up. The only saving grace was the narrator extraordinaire, Scott Brick. He applied just the right amount of expression to each sentence he read as he defined the characters and the narrative.
However, it was hard to stay interested in a book that seemed to go on and on without really accomplishing anything. It was repetitive and not up to the standards of other DeMille books. The language used is crude, and although the dialogue between the characters is often humorous, it also seems senseless, as well. In an attempt to create romance, the authors have the characters engage in mindless, sarcastic banter and silly pillow type talk. Finally, the book nears the end of its journey, and military corruption is exposed as the deserter’s connection to it is revealed. The story could have been told in half the pages.
THE DESERTER is a brisk and entertaining read with plenty of action. However, the Brodie character's glib humor becomes a bit tedious after a few hundred pages. His overly serious sidekick, Maggie Taylor, seems to be there just as a straight man (person) for his lame jokes, and as a caution to his dangerous machismo. Clearly, DeMille plans to develop a series around these two characters. One can only hope that he considers making this relationship a little more believable by muting this shtick. After all, Hammett already did it quite well with Nick and Nora Charles.
Billed as a thriller, the main characters are army CID Investigators, Scott Brodie and Maggie Taylor. Their assignment is to ’track and retrieve’ a famed army deserter, Kyle Mercer.
The locations
I generally like Mr. DeMille’s crisp, interesting writing. But the characters, the locations, the plots and subplots did not appeal to me at all in this title.
I really detest a smart aleck and I could have cared less in the end if our Scott Brodie lived or died on his mission. And Ms. Taylor seemed to be written as a superficial ornament.
I know this is fiction, but it read more as a fantasy.
Warning: If you dislike smart-alec type A personalities then this book will annoy you. Sometimes the people needed to do a job do not care about your feelings and don't care if you like them. Just ask Travis McGee or Jack Reacher.
The action and pacing of this book is very good and the descriptions of Venezuela are excellent.
Decorated SEAL Captain Kyle Mercer leaves camp one night and is then subsequently captured by the Taliban. After two years captivity, he escapes by killing his captors, videoing it, and resigning his commission. Now, the Navy's trying to find him and bring him to justice for the desertion. To wit, they employ Scott Brodie and Maggie Taylor of the Criminal Investigation Division to find him. Of course, there's far more going on and other agencies are in the hunt for Mercer. And they don't want him captured alive.
I wish the reason Mercer deserted was a bit more ethically murky for character-building purposes, but the story is still really good. I'll look forward to reading more about Brodie's escapades in the future.
This book is so DeMille. It is fast paced, thrilling and brilliant! DeMille fans will not be disappointed. It is filled with twists and turns, double crosses, politics, and believable characters. A nail biting adventure. a must read!
Scott Brodie and Maggie Taylor, both CID officers, (think Paul Brenner and Cynthia Sunhill from the General's Daughter with whom they bear striking similarities in looks and speech) need to go undercover to Venezuela to bring back a Captain Kyle Mercer who deserted his unit and committed some heinous crimes in Afghanistan. He has now been seen by a less than reliable witness in Venezuela in a brothel for underage girls in the slums of Caracas. Clearly, the Army has way, way too much money if it were to indulge in such a risky venture, kidnap (or kill) this guy Mercer.
I really admire many things about Venezuela, the foremost being the conductor Dudamel and the truly magnificent Youth orchestra and high school music programs. That is not the country of this book and I found the plot to be a mish-mash of plot holes. I did like the Paul Brenner-like banter of the thinly disguised Brodie. Why invent a new character when you already had one on the books? (Perhaps because he wrote this with his son, Alex DeMille, another puzzler, the way to get his son a head start in the writier's market.)
I have read (or listened to) several DeMille and enjoyed the Brenner and Corey characters. I was disappointed in this one and certainly won't read the The Cuban Affair, which other readers have described as being similar in its travelogue nature. I enjoy reading the history and current affairs of other countries be they failed or successful; I also enjoy a good mystery/thriller/police procedural like the General's Daughter (5 stars); I do not enjoy one that succeeds at neither.