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Hidden among the crates in a recently discovered World War II bunker are documents stamped with an elaborate black swan, the insignia of the murdered King Ludwig II. According to legend, Ludwig stockpiled a massive treasure in the years before his death, a cache of gold and jewels that would finance the construction of the largest castle of all time. But in the years since his death, no one has found any evidence that Ludwig had hidden anything. Until now. Jonathon Payne and David Jones are pulled into the mystery by a colleague of theirs, a former supply sergeant in the U.S. military who asks them to investigate. They agree to help and quickly find themselves in a life-or-death struggle to uncover the truth about Ludwig's murder and his mythical treasure.… (more)
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On the "not-as-good" side, Kuzneski's dialog between the main characters is a bit trite and cliche. Even considering I came into this series midway, the character development was stilted and uneven. Side comments made by the main characters left the reader wondering as to deeper meaning and, on occasion, begged further explanation. Additionally, from a "flow" point-of-view, there were several instances in the novel where lengthy, superfluous, descriptions and narratives distracted from the chain of events and plot pacing. Lastly, I found the ending a bit abrupt and unfulfilling. While I acknowledge this is one in a series and the story will resume (one assumes) in the next installment, "The Secret Crown" did leave the reading hanging as to a couple of plot elements particular to this storyline.
All-in-all, a very decent read for fun, relaxing entertainment. I'll definitely be adding Kuzneski's other works to my wish list.
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I have one thing to say... Mr. Kuzneski, when does production for a movie begin? This book reads like a fantastic movie from start to finish!
Kuzneski has a way of drawing the reader into the action, until you can smell the gunpowder, the blood, touch the treasure and feel the adrenaline rush!
I give this book Five Stars and my Thumbs Up!
***DISCLOSURE: This book was provided by G.P. Putnam & Sons through the Library Thing in exchange for an independent and non-biased review, and was a copy of the Uncorrected Proof, which may not reflect the final print copy.
The novel tells of retired special ops buddies Jon Payne and David Jones, a wise-cracking duo who have a knack for treasure hunting. Care to guess what treasure they’re hunting for in “The Secret Crown?” But that’s the problem. It's one thing if we or the characters already known what they were looking for, and it was just a matter of unraveling various puzzles and traps. But all we know is there’s a treasure. Once we find out what it is…well…duh. It’s also extremely anti-climactic.
I liked the humor between the two main protagonists, although they were rather one-dimensional. The action was relatively well done, but there were long periods of explanation of King Ludwig II’s eccentricities that really slowed down the book. So pacing was a significant problem here.
Payne and Jones are called to the aid of a quasi criminal/friend, Kaiser, who needs their skills to hunt for this unknown treasure. But Kaiser, a former US supply sergeant (who now supplies other stuff to the highest bidders) has a severe problem with a competitor. However, we really find nothing out about this competitor other than he sends “goons” after our heroes. Kuzneski’s constant use of “goon” for the bad guys was extremely annoying. Goon? Really? This isn’t a 1930s Chicago gangster story. Can’t you think of another term?
I might have better enjoyed the book had I read the previous stories of Payne and Jones (as their adventures are referred to often). But unless a novel clearly states it’s part of a series, it’s not the reader’s responsibility to go back and read earlier works…especially if he won the book as a part of LT’s Early Reviewer program.
When it comes down to it, “The Secret Crown” is a history lesson about Ludwig II with a little action, wise-cracking, and puzzle-solving thrown in.
Although, sometimes a little far-fetched, this is an enjoyable escapist novel that is filled with historical references, that it made me want to visit Bavaria and the castles built by Ludwig.
If I were at all interested in Mad King Ludwig of Bavaria, this novel would make me lose that interest in a hurry. Don't waste your time.
Bob in Chicago
The humor between the two main characters is interesting though somewhat stereotyped. The action portions of the story are plausible. The history portion maybe based on legend, I was not familiar with this legend to know. Several of the steps in solving the mystery and finding the treasure seemed to be little too large based on the information presented leading up to it.
This is a good book to sit down and read and just enjoy. It is perfect for a vacation for some light reading.
Kaiser, the retired American military man that runs a smuggling business in German, calls Jon & DJ away to help solve a mysterious "find" in Germany/Bavaria. One thing leads to another and Petr
Now that I've got that out of the way, if you like Dan Brown or Steve Berry and are looking for some fun fairly clean treasure hunting that is action packed, this might be just what the doctor ordered. Not a lot of thought is needed since the author explains it all in detail. I did mostly enjoy reading it as long as I wasn't thinking too much about "Why did he feel the need to put that in there?"
Payne and Jones are ex-members of the MANIACS, a secret, highly trained group of soldiers. A call from a somewhat shady but trusted friend sends them on their way to Bavaria where they
This book was a lot of fun and didn’t take itself too seriously. The banter between Payne and Jones reminded me of Cussler’s Dirk Pitt and Al Giordino and was one of my favorite parts of the story. The historical tie to the real King Ludwig, II was a very interesting foundation to the story, and the description of the real life places in and around Bavaria was fascinating. It added a lot to the story. (Once you are finished with the book, go to the author’s website and check out photos of the real-life locales described. But don’t go before, because it contains spoilers.)
The action sequences were well-done and kept the pace of the book moving along quickly, which is what I look for in a good thriller. The riddles and solutions were clever and the real-life antics and achievements of King Ludwig added a lot of flavor to the story.
My only complaint, and it’s a mild one, is the way in which some of the background information, including the history of King Ludwig, was revealed. It was almost entirely related through characters lecturing about it rather than shown in flashbacks to the time in question. The jeopardy of the heroes themselves never seemed too serious, although the battles were realistic and the outcome never entirely assured.
All in all, this book is a fun, light-hearted adventure with exciting action sequences and a very interesting back story. It made me look forward to reading other books in the series.
I was fortunate to receive an advance copy of this book through LibraryThing.
I didn't like the way that one bad guy was introduced and then nothing much was done with him, I am assuming that he is going to play a major role in the next book otherwise there is no point to this
I also didn't like the way everybody dismissed as irrelevant something that DJ discovered and that he thought would be important in solving the mystery, but what annoyed me more about this is that when DJ is proved right nobody apologises.