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There is magic in the big city literally. New York City has a small, and by preference discrete, population of witches and wizards who live and love and go dancing just like everyone else. Holly McClure is one of them, a successful writer who tries to ignore her heritage, except when the local Magistrate needs her special gift in his coven. Holly is far more interested in Evan Lachlan, the handsome federal marshal who works with her best friend, assistant district attorney Susannah Wingfield. But trouble is coming to the City in the form of a black coven run by a murderous psychopath, and deputy marshals and ADAs are powerless to deal with that kind of crime. The danger to Holly is extreme, for her special gift is the power of her blood to strengthen and bind any spell, for good or for evil. Holly's passionate love affair will be derailed by those who want to drain her for their own purposes. In the end it will be magic against magic, and Holly McClure will have to risk all for life and love."… (more)
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I had real problems with this book. First, all of Rawn's books have an element of romance in them, the "One True Love" concept (Rohan & Sioned, Pol & Sionell, Tobin & Chay, Sara & Collan, Gorynel & Cai, etc). I have no problem with this in a fantasy setting; it only bothers me when the setting is the "Real World," because it just doesn't work that way.
Also, the Magic in the book was really confusing me. At first it seemed that a person's magic (something they were born with) and their religion or faith were separate things (hence being a Catholic Witch). But at other points in the book it became clear that if you were born a Witch than you became a Wiccan. The description of Holly's family is a prime example of that. Despite everyone else in the family being at least nominally Christian, if you were born with the talent, then you were Wiccan. Why? Doesn't jibe with things spouted by the characters at various other places in the book.
Holly's character was inconsistent. She was apparently supposed to be this big, strong woman, who knew what she wanted and wasn't afraid to go it alone, etc etc, prime example of feminist womanhood, blah blah blah. Except she dissolved into tears and insecurity at a moment's notice, particularly regarding men, she constantly whinged on and on about WHAT she was, and despite that educated intelligence she was supposed to have, that was so good at understanding other people, she hadn't the faintest clue what was going on with herself. I know that is common, but it seemed a little excessive with her. It's rare that I don't like a main character, but Holly pretty much just got on my nerves.
The whole scene with Evan and his breakdown just irritated the hell out of me. If it really did happen like it was described in the book, no way would he have been treated like that.
The fact that Evan and Elias don't like each other is harped upon constantly, but really no reason is given. Same with Holly and Elias. He just didn't seem that bad to me.
There was entirely too much build up to the main action -- the book probably could have been shortened by half and still provided plenty of information. The characters I was most interested in -- Aunt Lulah, and Nicky and Alec -- we didn't see nearly enough of.
All in all, I thought the book was inconsistent. The writing itself held my interest, and the story was interesting, but I just didn't have that level of caring about the characters that is necessary to really get into a book. There were just too many places in it that caused me to say "Wait....what?" and have to pull back to figure out why that made sense (and more often than not, it didn't).
This is the second book I’ve given up on this year, but it at least helped me come to the decision that I’m no longer going to force myself to finish books I don’t like. Like someone else said, life is too short. It’s very difficult for me to give up on a book when I feel like
This is NOT necessarily a bad book, though. I don’t want to say that. Rawn is an experienced and skilled writer well known already for her Dragon Star, Dragon Prince and Exiles fantasy series’, and it’s just the style and characters I personally don’t like. The synopsis sounded fantastic! The story centers around a modern urban witch, Holly McClure, her new relationship with an Irish cop, and the issue of a local rogue coven practicing black magick that Holly’s coven must stop. All of the characters live in NYC and have day jobs, mostly in the judiciary branch, and the strongest draw of the book for me was that it went beyond your usual “Witch 101” mentality and started at a more advanced level. In other words, it makes the assumption that you’re already a little bit schooled in the realm of the occult, witchcraft, and magickal theory. After practicing myself for almost 20 years now, that really appealed to me. I thought, “Ah, what a relief! We won’t have to go through all the introductory “here’s what a witch does” rigamarole!
I bought this in hardcover when it came out in 2006 because at that time I thought, given my own involvement and interest in witchcraft and the paranormal, surely the burgeoning occult fiction genre was going to appeal to me - a la Jim Butcher, Laurell K. Hamilton, Rachel Caine, Kim Harrison, Kelley Armstrong, and others. I was wrong.
What I specifically do not care for is the bantering, chick-litty and very simplistic style all of these authors seem to have adopted. At first it seemed kind of edgy, but the novelty wore off quickly and now I really hate it. They all read like Live Journal blogs. It’s quite the fad and permeates a lot of contemporary fiction, which I think is a shame because at the risk of sounding melodramatic, I think the art of fine lyrical prose is becoming lost in favor of witty repartee that is, frankly, pretentious, overused, and just plain dull. I just prefer more artistry in my reading, if that makes sense.
In this book specifically there was far too much romantic/flirty banter between the two main characters just in the first 50 pages; far too much going on about how fabulous and sexy they found each other…just passages and passages of each character extolling the other’s virtues: “he’d never met a woman like her, who could make him feel this way” kind of stuff. You know what I’m talking about. Fifty pages of that was enough for me.
However, that doesn’t make it a “bad” book. In fact, I might actually recommend it (at least as much as I can recommend something I only read 50 pages of) to anyone who enjoys a strong modern romantic aspect to their genre fiction and likes that gum-snapping, kinda-tough-but-still-girly style – kind of a cross between Stephanie Plum and Samantha Stephens.
For those like me who want the more advanced occult element without the fluff and kissy-face, Rosemary Edghill’s Bast books are going to be a more satisfying choice.
Holly McClure is a practicing witch (good) and also a massively wealthy and successful novelist. She mysteriously falls for a blue-collar Irish cop who doesn't know that she's a witch OR rich. When he finds out she's rich, her has such issues with her making more money than he does that he tries to break up with her. Basically, the guy is a jerk through-and-through, there is not ONE attractive thing about him. Why Holly likes him is a total mystery to the reader. Anyway, Holly has a rival, who is ALSO a sucessful, Anne-Rice-type novelist, who is a Slut and a Bad Witch. Her hi--jinks lead (slowly - this book is very long and rambling) to a showdown with Evil Occultists which gets some people murdered and her cop boyfriend dragged into the mess... along the way gratuitously insulting New Yorkers (and all city folks), goths, most pagans, most fans of bad supernatural novels such as this one, etc. (Although, surprisingly, there is a positive portrayal of gay characters, and pains are taken to portray Good Paganism as a positive religion). Still, in the end, Holly and the cop Get Out of the Big Bad City, Settle Down on a Nice Country Farm and Have Children. I roll my eyes.
As the subtitle says, it's a love
Don't read it to learn about Wicca, but do read it for an enjoyable tale.
This is an interesting story of a group of magicians,
I enjoyed the read and I look forward to the sequel Fire Raiser.
Set in the current day,
It took me a little while to force my way into the book. I thought a lot of the banter between Holly and Evan was charming, but their falling out seemed very contrived. I was completely overwhelmed by the unending stream of detail regarding stones, flowers, herbs, incenses, days of the year, colors ... and how those various things contribute to spells. The addition of a whole slew of mythos from around the world just added to the jumble. I even had to read the final confrontation three times to try to understand what was going on... and I'm still not sure I know what the author was trying to convey there.
At the end of the day, though, I thought the book redeemed itself. It also doesn't hurt to have a hero that's (like me) approaching middle age, but still manages to get the girl...